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I will make a new series
This story is a about Milo who falls in love with Mara and when he is with her he is capable to do anything
New parts will come soon if you the score is good
If i get a crappy job it means people don't like it so I really won't have a reason to continue this series
I may not be the best artist nor the best animator but I'm trying
I won't get anywhere if I don't practice...
so making this series will definetly improve my artistic skills


Well enjoy

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Ugh

It made my insides crawl it was so girly...sorry but it's just not my thing.

Wish it was that simple..

I wish....

Hmm...

Not bad not bad...I liked the graphics and some parts were funny but animation could be improved, along with shortened delays cause they were annoying. Overall 7.

Argentin responds:

yea i kinda hurried in the last moment
I always do that
I am so excited to see the finished product and submit it so i hurry up and screw everything up

Not very enjoyable.

I'm sure some people will like this, so it gets a 2/5 to help get out of Judgement. However, I won't be checking up on the sequel.

cool, but

it could be longer... the animation isn't that bad, and i like the style. the music wasn't that good...
3/5 7/10

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Score
2.47 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 3, 2008
1:21 PM EDT