LOL

could work on how you dre the body it looked kinda sloppy work on it dude.

but that was freaking funny

Nicely done.

I would say as a standard cartoon this wasn't that great. But for your first animation, it was amazing. Myself (and most people I know) started with crude stick animations, so I think this is already a great start. Give it a few months/years of practice and you'll be cranking out some awesome stuff.

Just one thing.................

LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Great Start

Great vid to start out on. I laughed when i saw how much bigger the guy was than him. I give you an 8 out of 10 for ur first vid. Keep on rockin!

Funny movie and funny author comments!

"Constructive criticism would be VERY appreciated." ahah! I would like some constructive criticism for my submissions aswell, but that seems to be too difficult. If someone doesn't appreciate the movie, he starts insulting, and that's why I don't like newgrounds... Well anyway: the movie could be better (I'm talking about graphics), but this is your first animation, isn't it? Ahah, I still remember my first animation: a four frames crappy running stick at 6 frm/s, so I think you started animating a lot better than me. As for the plot: I found it very funny! The main character seems to be a superhero, right? Well I thought that he was going to beat the chinese guy up, but he has been killed ahah that was absolutely umpredictable. Very good, I voted 5.

By the way: I'm glad I'm finally reviewing! I wrote a review thirty minutes ago, but my mouse fell and the cursor went on the x that closes the window, and it automatically closed (I started swearing ahah), so this is the third time I write this thing, I hope you appreciate it!