well lets just say

that was bad the moveing camra thing looked bad and the lost conection thing was bad but the animation was ok If you keep makeing them you will get better and better

bad

it needs more work

I agree with pointydagger.

As I just said, I agree with pointydagger, you could've most likely gone somewhere if you made it longer and with more episodes of this or something like this. I liked it, but it was too short for me, so I have to give you a 2. Good luck on your future work if you try to make flashes.

Okay....

I think you couldve done a lot more with this. If you make more, you should really put more effort into them. That line thing to show the camera moveing was bad. Change that.

lol well it isnt bad

its not bad but i think it could use some work, 7/10 dude