WHAT
IVE NEVER EVER SEEN SOMETHING THAT SCARY AND KOOL IT MUST OF TAKEN AGES TO MAKE I LOVE THE MUTATION BIT ITS GREAT
OH GOD I HOPE U MAKE ANOTHER 1
-Tomashcu-
Author Comments
I've been working on this for a pretty long time now, and I happy it's all done :). Anyways, this was just a little short I wanted to make to see what I could create in Flash, because I am now going to start a longer flash, knowing I'm capable of doing so :D. Yeah, yeah, there's some sound bugs in there but there was not much I could do about it... anyways, I hope you like it!
---You need Flash 8---
Oh yeah, sorry about the horrid spelling mistakes :P
Snitchelz responds:
Thanks man! Yeah, I'm actually gonna start a REAL movie again, unlike the other one I uploaded... and I'll try to make it scary ;D
Great job!!
A great movie with a few painstaking flaws.
PROS:
+I loved the atmosphere, the story was there enough that it created a better understanding.
+Above average graphics, and I love the gore.
+Good intense/scary moments, I actually jumped at a point.
CONS:
-I know you said there were soundbugs, but you really need to fix them!
-Another thing you said was there were spelling errors, I have to say it took away from the atmosphere a lot at times.
-Try to actually draw out some of those scenes where things are getting bigger and smaller, using effects doesn't make it look as good.
-At a few points the perspective of two things were off, that didn't really ruin it for me, but it was something you should maybe look for next time.
OVERALL:
Good film with a few flaws. I think a sequel is a must for this, I could see this becoming a hit series without a doubt. You just need to fix a few things up and make sure to take in critisicm and not blow it off, because critics make films good.
Snitchelz responds:
yeah, I know, I WAS pretty careless with the spelling... No worries though, my new movie will be fully grammar error proof, and I'll spend much more on the animations... :D
Well done
I can tell that a lot of time went into this, what wrecks it is the long, long shots that stretch this movie out to be way longer than it needs to be, and the many, many spelling mistakes.
very nice
has exellent atmosphere, coice acting needs work but not bad.
would make a decent feature length movie
looking forward to a sequel