Please, like all of us reviewers here...

Finish the tale because the artwork is pretty nice and the flow just seems to work very well... until it loops itself after a few seconds later!

Finish it !

It's clear that you have posted an unfinished tale. I like the graphics - depresive but nice :)
Make the whole movie and put it here.

i dont know

why people post unfinished projects... they should be finished... and you have to be patient untill it is done... i like the style and the way it was going... but if you were looking for opinions you should try an uploading site and the BBS... they do a good job with that kinda thing...

the god thing for you is this passed with a pretty decent score... but i would like to see more done with it!!!

Ummm

It was just 2 pictures with an object. Its ok but If I were to watch this series than its going to have to be more than a couple scribbly lines and moving fills. The sentence at the beginning was kinda of cliche, as in there's too many of those kind of plots. "Ones journey through life" has been used over and over again (As in think of something new). Grammer checks: Its "you're" not "your". As in saying "You are". "I know YOU'RE awake" aka "I know you are awake". I know its not that big but its one of my pet peeves XD . Well, at least since this seems to be a starter, perhaps it wouldn't be bad to see more. Dont take this review the wrong way, Im usually a nice guy and this is just my analysis of this movie, this is no way saying "This sucks". Its just a way of improving.

good but is it finished?!

good concept, i like the way u drew and colored ur animation, but is this it?
it needs to be longer with more animation, like u didnt animate anything only the colors was moving nothing more =/
and that mask that appeared at the end needs to be made the same way u did the guy and the bed, what i mean is u should make people watch this and could not wait for the next act!
other than that u got nice concepts , please continue!!
oh and the music was good too!!