The Back Alley Gang

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First real attempt at flash, ARE YOU HAPPY NOW! Sorry, I don't have a mic so I can't do voice overs, AND sorry for the file size!

Well our story begins as The Back Alley Gang, (Mark and Craig), Mark is the white dude and Craig is the Asian dude with the gay red band in his hair. These two hooligans are bored and decide to check out a selection of games at GameStop.


Lol you said this was a smash hit

Not a smash hit as it claims to be on your new movie about mark n duds. Lol Ill go kill myself. ( Kidding idiot. ) It had bad graphics and you should work on it.


not 2 good my friend.

It's a start..

I, and I'm sure the bulk of users who follow your submissions appreciate your decision to start animating. I like your use of background music but the speech bubbles and overall animation needs to be tightened up and streamlined a bit more. You could claim that the asymmetric art style was what you were shooting for, but you wouldn't be fooling anybody. I enjoyed your use of clean background music but please don't let sound quality take up the bulk of your file size. I noticed that there were really only two jokes in a 5MB flash. If you're going to make your viewers sit through a loading screen, at least let them be rewarded by more than two jokes once they've downloaded the whole thing.

Overall, with some fixes and some refining, I'm positive that you could start churning out quality animations. Keep up the good work and good luck on your improvement as an artist!

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not as good

as your old flashs but it good for trying new thing 5/5 10/10

Reiewer responds:

ehh too much hate mail for my old flashes but thanks for ur review

this is instant classic

all haters eat dick 5/5 10/10

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thank you

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3.35 / 5.00

Jul 25, 2008
4:41 AM EDT
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