cool

but snake and all the soldiers were really badly drawn but still it was an okay flash and maybe when u have free time u can make a beeter one or update this one.

hmm

great art style (5 points) good(not great) story line(5 points)

too short (-1 point) so that turns out to be 9/10 and 5/5 because i kinda loved it
keep going untill u hit the top all time best list :P

Could have been better. but could have been worse

I kind of liked the general idea, but it could have been more interesting. Maybe something like him hiding in the box in a room, then a bad guy picking it up and finding him inside. Graphically, it looks like there's pretty much a total lack of shading and the shapes for the soldiers in particular look unnatural (mainly because totally straight lines or totally smooth curves are rare in nature). However, from the looks of it, this wasn't a big enough thing to really warrant that much detail. I'm just trying to give feedback on what was good or bad.

Also, the gradient gunshot was way ugly. I'm guessing you just didn't have the time (or didn't feel like devoting the time for a complex muzzle flash. Really though, they're not particularly easy to do, so I guess it's excusable, but if I were you, I'd probably go with a flash of smoke instead.

Half decent.

Quite simplistic

Although I thought Snake would do more stuff in the box, like, shooting inside it, instead of just leaving it there, making it look like the well-known Rambo-like guy against 1000 enemies.

Keep trying.