Alot better than number 1. For certain. The effects (Explosions, gunshots) are superb. It also nice to understand the soryline, I didn't know the last one was a preview to a film.
Areas to improve:
- Animation, try animate tohe people, moving
- Add some shading
- Nice use of subtitles!
Overall, a big improvement. Good work!
7/10 - 4/5