WAT was that
Piece of crap o my god dude it wasnt even funny the plot blowed ass and the friking cartoon overall could use better work dude THaT WAS A PIecE OF SHIT!!!!
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WARNING: THE AUDIO MAYBE BE OFF FOR SOME, NEED TO WATCH ON A REALLY NICE COMPUTER.. LIKE MY MAC, I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY.. FIREFOX IS GOOD TOO.
The first episode almost took a month to make so please vote fairly,
I've worked on this episode more then i have worked on anything. :D
Justin and Ayden ( Elastic lad n Flyboy ) has to deal with their biggest problem yet, School.
I've thought pretty much everything that's going to happen in the episodes, from 1 - 8 ( there are actually more then that )
I had so much fun making this, i can't believe i got it done so quickly.
If you have any questions about E n F, pm, or comment.
( It might be slow for some, but please be fair, it's not suppose to be like that. )
Could be better & could be worse. Good job thou =)
Ok I watched this piece on Safari & Firefox. BUT I STILL have the same problem w/ sound. I can not hear the characters very well & on top of that the lip sync w/ what was said is WAY off. Dood your animation is nice & the cartoon art was great but you need to have better sound tools & better sync if you're going to get better reviews :)
The outcome fo some effort.
overall, you have a lot to learn about basic art, HOWEVER, the start of a plot and a thought out one too. (to some degree at least.) i didn't exactly like the Directing though. at least certain scenes. Just seems too Close up and the background seems to distract. drawing the eyes, making it harder to FULLY take in whats happening. Only time and Experience can solve that. God knows Im struggling with that shit >_<
so i have to say good job.
it seems like your trying and that is, in the end, what matters in art.
JumpingGirraffe responds:
It's just a cartoon,so art isn't a major factor, eventually i might add shadow, but it's not something to worry about.
Start of something good...
I can tell you put a lot of work into this. The art was fine. I think you've established a your own style and thats great.
Usually a series starts with a little character introduction. You don't have to have a meaningful storyline yet, but maybe give us a sense of who your characters are. You probably have a pretty clear idea about what makes them different from each other (besides hair color and voice). Tell us a little more about them, so we can care too. =)
I had trouble understanding/hearing the voices sometimes (especially for the blonde kid). If it can't be helped, perhaps give us subtitles. I could tell where the jokes were most of the time, but sometimes I just didn't hear the punchline.
Don't lose steam or motivation! Take the good with the bad and build upon your work!
JumpingGirraffe responds:
Thanks, subtitles are going to be added maybe to the next one depends on how clearly we speak.
ok clip
ok clip small humour bit out of sync tho