Fairly average toon
Predictable narrative/joke and a moral I've seen before.
I did like the washed out colours in the bg and the sfx were fairly effective.
Looking more carefully at a motorcycle, deleting the lines that pop over at the corners would help slightly, visually. Mostly, it's jut the predictability that lets it down.
Also, fix the replay function.
I docked 1 point for false advertising on the Flash forum.
Very funny nice one dean!
No point to it just a good moral. I liked it but it wasn't an ohh awww sort of cartoon. Looked like it was fun to make though and thats all that counts. Fuck the critics they can suck it. It was good.
The replay buttons all messed up, just to let u know. Good flash. I loved the quote at the end!
i helped this pass judgement
the animation may be bad but it's a pretty funny short