hey, that was pretty good! you had different sets of layers, a common theme and overall story, and this is really good for a first work! just a few tips for ya-i know it's hard work, but add more frames and increase the Frames per second rate. this will make the flash smoother to watch and will give it a little more of a professional look. also, for the stick figure guy, don't draw him out freestyle, use straight lines. if youve watched any of the Xiao Xiao series, you'll see each imb is perfectly straight, and there's a tool for that. Each limb should be a separate frame, but keep it organized. COLOR! many have said this, and don't be afraid to throw in some grass or blue skies, or even clouds (animate the clouds if you want). and last thing, lets try and get some music and a play button in there. i know there's a way to insert a layer for just a music clip, and there's a page on NG where you can get button for your flash. anyway, take these points into consideration and make an improved version of this, i'll be looking forward to it!