Will need some work...

It was okay, the keyframing was kind of weird(ie, the hand was moving slow, but she gets pushed over hard). For a first Flash, this is kind of good, which makes the 3 review stars.

Also, to add sound, first, do FILE>Import..., find the sound file(s) you want(sounds should come in .mp3, .m4a or .ogg are tiny with great quality), then open up the MEDIA LIBRARY. Finding it should be common sense. Then, drag the appropriate sound file to the frame you want to start it at.

Maybe a higher framerate than (what I think is) 12, maybe 20 or 24 or 30, idk.

1/5, at least deserves something better than 0

That was not bad!

But you could had put some music like a tiny tim song. I would like this flash to have a tiny tim song in it but you don't know how too maybe when you get better we can make a really great flash for newgrounds and they might always vote it for 5's!

Lol!

Haha, that was really funny! For your first flash that was awesome lol :D