That Was Totally Awsome!
That Was So Freakin Funny I almost Pee'd in my pants the art was a little cheesy but it was so funnt. Keep it up!
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This is what happens when you rob an old stubborn man...
Kinda Funny And Cool sound effects.
I hope you like it.
To New grounds - Best Site EVER!
CartoonUnlimited responds:
Really? Well thanks the next one will have better art.
You remind me of me...
The Basis for the plot was good, but you need to work on your animation. Really the attack scene way too short (remember this part is the climax of the film) which made the resolution unsatisfying. You remind me of me when I was starting out in flash animation (all of which were blammed on arrival). Watch some of the highly rated films, and look for animation aesthetics, and scene timings, along other important cues. Don't worry, your making good progress, and hopefully you'll one day soon you'll make a great flash!
CartoonUnlimited responds:
Thank You, That Was My 3rd Submission and I have been looking on Flash Portal For good ideas. I watch some movies to get the idea. But I have trouble animating and drawing, is there anything you recomend?
Not bad
The art needs work, but it was kinda funny
CartoonUnlimited responds:
Thanks, keep looking for my user name because im maker something simalar but a heck of a lot better! Im not much of an artist so, can you please help me on any tips of cartooning?
Welll...
definantly could have better graphics and animation, and something seemed wrong with the frame rate. you should delete this one and work alot longer on another. but the idea was good.
CartoonUnlimited responds:
Well, what can I say... It was my first submission...
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