SOME BORING AND SOME GOOG GARPHICS BUT SOME

this is some boring ¡a! and the bombermans are robot ok te white only,

español/spanish:esto es un poco aburrido ¡a! y los bombermans son robots bien el blanco solo.

I could watch this.

I really enjoyed this, I could probably watch a good 30 minutes of his at a time. I mean I would like to see where you were going with the story.

My only complaint is that you decided not to use voices and instead opted for subtitles. But hey thats your choice. From just a skill standpoint, I see you have got an imagination that you are capable of animating, but the overall quality of the animation is mediocre.

Better than other stuff that didn't get blammed

You are probably going to hate hearing this, but it needs audio. Smoother animation would be nice. It was kind of interesting though.

BOOM!!

It's good that you made a flash animation last several minutes.

The movie kept my interest long enough to see the whole thing, though I wish the whole story would've been concluded. If any advice, perhaps add some voice acting, and shorten that repeated "Paradox" scene.

Nice work, though. Here's looking forward to the next chapter.