But the characters movements need to be smoothed out a little bit and a little more detail put into the background, the audio choices were good, but the voices also could be more clear it is sometimes muffled and dies away, great timing though, the plot could be a little more twisty, just to keep the viewer into the entire series altogether but nice overall job.
it could have been smoother
not too bad
the graphics were not bad but work on:
- walk cycles
- dynamic stuff like fire, the string and so on
- and please: work on some humor scenes! your movie seemed kinda funny but you could punch this up if you did following:
fox example at the scene when the guy wants to smuggle in the barrel:
it had been a lot more funny if you had made this guys REALLY be a fat guy who is coincidentally looking the the other one. so the women had tried to see whats under the jacket and at the same time the other guys comes along and loses the barrel..
sorry for my english im form austria ¬.¬
It was alright. Animation was okay, story telling was okay. Not the worst flash cartoon I've seen but not the best either. Work on your animation and story telling skills better and I think I'll see some interesting cartoons in the future.
it was ok
animation wasnt good, way to stiff, drawings were kinda blah. U def put a lot of work into it, i didnt watch the whole thing, sorry. I didnt Blam it tho lol. I wasnt into it but im sure many ppl will be