it was good but coulda been better or longer
It was good, I liked your drawing and story...."apple juicing the carpet" good joke right there.
What I dont like tho is that it ended so soon...you could have added to that story pretty easily or hell you could make a sequel out of the talking apple. Another thing I dont like is that I know you are doing all the voice acting but you need to try harder to sound different between your characters cause you and the apple almost sounded identical.
It was good and I hope to see more!