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Cardboard City

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Um, guys? Its a collab, there's wasn't SUPPOSED to be even a vague plot, so if you're just going to review and say 'OMG it was liek borring and so i haeted it whar was the story? lolololol 0!' we've heard it before!

Hey thanks for the front page tom! Here, have a key to the city! And daily second, thats pretty cool!

Animators who I haven't co-authored will be co-authored as soon as they add me! :)

This is Cardboard City

When nick and I (moro) were trying to come up with a theme for a collab we could lead together, we were kinda stuck. We both wanted something that could be made cohesive, something that all the parts by all the animators could have in common, without looking too similar. We puzzled together for a little while, and then I started thinking, what about a city?

And that was that. Both of us LOVE textured animation, and we decided cardboard would be one of the more interesting substances to play with. With that, the collab was started, and little by little, it picked up speed, with gradually more and more people seeing the thread and trying stuff out, which was pretty cool. One of the main things we were going for was for the animators involved to stretch themselves, and we think that happened.

Haha, well, I guess I should post the lineup we've got for you fine folk tonight :)

Handsome Jake
Dr Clay
and Goat-Man

these were spectacular the whole way through, when I made them do push ups they didn't whine, there was no trouble at mealtimes, we just all had a really good time.

Vincoid won the house of cards contest though. he's quite good at that ;)

The collab ended up being huge, a lot larger than I had expected even though compared to other multi author stuff here on NG, there weren't a huge number of animators. In total it's... well, might as well do ALL THE SPECS AT ONCE OMG LOLOLOLOLOL


7674 frames in total, including menu, preloader game, dr.clay's piece, EVERYTHING!
319.7 seconds long, which makes it like, over 4 minutes long
24 frames per second

so ya, myself I was really shocked this morning when I added everything in and found it was almost 8000 frames long. I've never had that before. thats a lot of frames. but we still can't say its OVER 9000 because ITS OVER 7000 just doesn't have that same ring to it, haha. :)

Hmm. what else. UMM.

well ya, as I said, all these guys were really fun to work with, and I think it shows. Myself, I'm quite pleased with the standard thats set, and hopefully its good enough for you high end critics out there too! :)

COOLIO NIATO was nice enough to make us an absolutely amazing preloader game, which was really cool of him to do. Its an awesome game. I'm addicted. My record so far is like, 25000 but Im sure a bunch of you can beat that, so if you do, PM me with a screenshot and I'll try to do better than whatever you got. hahaha.

but seriously, a round of cardboard applause (the loudest kind there is, of course!) to coolio for that.


so, without further ado, we present Cardboard City. Enjoy the show!

-Moro, Nick, Jake, Ziwon, Vincoid, Goatman, Marcy, Kyle, Dr Clay, Coolio, and Biskits :)

oh and if you've read all this, congrats! there's also an easter egg on the menu ;)

that is all.



Not bad but confused as to how this made it to daily 2nd? It's really not that good, the music really sucked too, sorry but i turned the volume off soon as i realised there was no dialogue coz it was abusing my ears. Also you've spelt corrugated differently in certain areas (corrigated). So to summerise not a bad flash, ruined by poor choice of music and lets be honest, a poor choice in a colab theme. I dont think you could've picked a duller theme if you tried.... a city.... made of cardboard, come on guys you can do better and you know it!

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MorrowDays responds:

lets be honest on my end too, you're in the minority. (I'd just say you're wrong, but that wouldn't really be nice)

jazz is beautiful, melodic, peaceful, saying JAZZ is abusing your ears is like saying a pillow is abusing your head as you lie on it. its not!

Its funny. everyone so often someone will get a review saying THIS SHOULDNT BE ON THE FRONTPAGE >:( or something, but if it got a low score and wasn't on the front page, that same person would say omg why has no one seen this?

basically, you should base your opinion on the animation at hand, not on how it scores.

Dissapointed :(

Yes I really am.
I thought this was going to be something more intresting but its cardborads afterall : P
Also bery creative.
The animations were cool but the collab was boring and almost made me close the pop up but no, I have to watch the whole movie :) Well the music were kind of repetive and annoying but still this collab was OK.

(Coolio I know that you wrote the Intro ^^)

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MorrowDays responds:

coolio did the preloader game... to my knowledge he didn't write anything.. well I guess he wrote all the AS involved in the game.. but thats it... hmm.

the music wasn't repetitive. I really don't get why people don't like jazz! :(

we'll try to be more exciting next time I guess :P

Actually, better than I anticipated

I've seen this thread of the forums for a while, and no offense to you all, but I thought it was gonna be another, poorly brought together collaboration with a spontaneous idea. But you executed it very well, ended up being very experimental, plus a great choice on the tune.

There were a few loose ends, and obviously some parts were better than others, but I think overall it deserved an 8.

MorrowDays responds:

fair enough! the thread was pretty quiet for a collab thread, I'd just not post for days on end which was kind of lame, so I can understand how it would seem too ambitious an idea for us.

I was impressed by the parts submitted as well, it was hard to know how people would take it.


YES!! Some people are experimenting on this site and uncovering some "new grounds," and not just creating video game parodies, or repeating tired old cock jokes! GREAT STUFF FELLAS!! :D

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MorrowDays responds:

What really bothers me about newgrounds is the four letter word collabs. those take no skill and there's no talent in them at all. ugh. its just terrible!


more seriously though, Im glad you liked that.

Me and Nick WANTED to do a cock joke parody video game collab but we thought this would be easier. haha.


Loved the music. The overall flash was superb also, loved the cardboard style. The "Emergency Rain Machine" was pretty funny. 5/5

MorrowDays responds:

Hey if I lived in a cardboard city I'd want an emergency rain machine too!

glad you liked it :)


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3.89 / 5.00

Jul 12, 2008
2:03 PM EDT