Not bad but confused as to how this made it to daily 2nd? It's really not that good, the music really sucked too, sorry but i turned the volume off soon as i realised there was no dialogue coz it was abusing my ears. Also you've spelt corrugated differently in certain areas (corrigated). So to summerise not a bad flash, ruined by poor choice of music and lets be honest, a poor choice in a colab theme. I dont think you could've picked a duller theme if you tried.... a city.... made of cardboard, come on guys you can do better and you know it!
lets be honest on my end too, you're in the minority. (I'd just say you're wrong, but that wouldn't really be nice)
jazz is beautiful, melodic, peaceful, saying JAZZ is abusing your ears is like saying a pillow is abusing your head as you lie on it. its not!
Its funny. everyone so often someone will get a review saying THIS SHOULDNT BE ON THE FRONTPAGE >:( or something, but if it got a low score and wasn't on the front page, that same person would say omg why has no one seen this?
basically, you should base your opinion on the animation at hand, not on how it scores.
Yes I really am.
I thought this was going to be something more intresting but its cardborads afterall : P
Also bery creative.
The animations were cool but the collab was boring and almost made me close the pop up but no, I have to watch the whole movie :) Well the music were kind of repetive and annoying but still this collab was OK.
(Coolio I know that you wrote the Intro ^^)
coolio did the preloader game... to my knowledge he didn't write anything.. well I guess he wrote all the AS involved in the game.. but thats it... hmm.
the music wasn't repetitive. I really don't get why people don't like jazz! :(
we'll try to be more exciting next time I guess :P
Actually, better than I anticipated
I've seen this thread of the forums for a while, and no offense to you all, but I thought it was gonna be another, poorly brought together collaboration with a spontaneous idea. But you executed it very well, ended up being very experimental, plus a great choice on the tune.
There were a few loose ends, and obviously some parts were better than others, but I think overall it deserved an 8.
fair enough! the thread was pretty quiet for a collab thread, I'd just not post for days on end which was kind of lame, so I can understand how it would seem too ambitious an idea for us.
I was impressed by the parts submitted as well, it was hard to know how people would take it.
YES!! Some people are experimenting on this site and uncovering some "new grounds," and not just creating video game parodies, or repeating tired old cock jokes! GREAT STUFF FELLAS!! :D
What really bothers me about newgrounds is the four letter word collabs. those take no skill and there's no talent in them at all. ugh. its just terrible!
more seriously though, Im glad you liked that.
Me and Nick WANTED to do a cock joke parody video game collab but we thought this would be easier. haha.
Loved the music. The overall flash was superb also, loved the cardboard style. The "Emergency Rain Machine" was pretty funny. 5/5
Hey if I lived in a cardboard city I'd want an emergency rain machine too!
glad you liked it :)