well...
kinda hard to rate something thats not finished. i see the artworks done by hand with no sprites so i guess i can judge that and the music you used. the art does well enough to say who the charaters are and whare they are but the music... well im not sure exactly what kind of mood you were going with that but it didnt seem to fit the element of wow or that situation for the matter. so definitly do something different with that anyway.