How could the original audience stand this?
I promise constructivity, however:
Something was definitely off about the way this flash ran- the two guys on the left were only in sync as far as keeping their own beat; after about 4 measures they're shooting out of time to the music! same with what I can assume is shrapnel? or coconuts? flying from the treestand.
Just in case you actually are accomplished in any of the applicable fields, please do mention, because outside of an exceptionally advanced understanding of theoretical, only-on-paper zen coupled with an exceptionally stunted understanding of communication style, could this be a piece of importance.
I'm pretty good at connecting vague dots and figuring out the intent behind a piece, but This is simply too poor quality to be useful except as a collection of artists' mistakes.
It should be redone, from scratch, before it is safe for public viewing.
And, along the lines of communication, noone, absolutely noone who's cosmopolitan enough to accept the message you're trying to communicate with films will put up with that dinging noise. It's just not healthy. Just listening to whatever A-bot's couple songs are on any given week is enough experience for a listener to disregard this.
Seriously, it doesn't seem like you watched your finished product before you posted it. Maybe it's a disparity in the graphics processing, but even so... this needs construction. It's not ready to get positive criticism.