nice but add voices and make the main character ha

nice but add voices and make the main character have for example a black shirt becuse I didn't know who fell out of the car when they fought!

so simple

nice how this flows right out of the first one, cool anyway
but voices are always a good idea.

Umm...

I think you need to spend some more time on your animations and sounds... Use your layers more... Apart from that the story line wasn't bad...

not bad

needs beter grapics

I'm impressed.

This was really good for such a small filesize. It just needs a little better animation.