Work=Needed
It's okay, better than your demo, to say the least.
It needs a preloader though, and (somewhat, not entirely) better drawings, but you're off to an okay start, but not perfect, or really good.
Keep trying though, you'll get better.
Author Comments
The first episode of pure boredom kinda turned out a little more funny then I had in mind. The girlfriend though was anice touch to the animation
I have no Idea what just happened
So.......he and his brother are monsters ? But they're in a bathroom ? I still don't get the Story. I suggest you work on your drawings with more care. Possibly use voice actors instead of text.
IceKube responds:
hes having a flash back if you were paying attention. then a girl who has an intense crush on him appears in the bathroom
Needs work
you said this was a little more funny than you thought, but i don't understand why. it's just not funny. if you put some voice work though and some better animation i thing it has potential. try a bit harder.
it's SHORT, too short...
I'm not going to blam it though because I think it has potential, by the way the title does not fit the storyline of this flash AT ALL! What does pure boredom have to do with this obviously dramatic scene? Anyways I liked it and I would like to see more, a lot more.
OH MAI
DIS IS RLY GOOT! VOATED 5!!!1!
PLZ LOOK AT MAI FLASH! KTHXBAI!!
