Well you don't want us to be hard on you...

...and I won't. But I gotta be honest.

Here's what I like. Old movies are awesome, but I don't like the text sliding to the screen. Maybe if they just pop out? The drawing/art was decent, and that can be neglected if the content of this flash was good. Unfortunately it wasn't what I'd expect.

If what you wanted to achieve was randomness the old way, you did it bro!

Hmm plot....?

It's a interesting idea to make a flash based on the old time silent movies, but even they had a plot or at least one that made sense...

GRAPHICS - Not to much in the way of animation.... Characters were original but a little more effort in drawing (texture and shading) would improve the flash greatly. I did however like the old movie style frames. (1/5)

SOUNDS - Music fit the theme well (charlie chaplin music).. (3/5)

ORIGINALITY - Very original however a reasonable plot the movie itself failed. (1/5)

Unfortunatley i'm not gonna pass this one through the portal, however i hope you improve on your submission or use my advice in future projects.

(1/5, 3/10)