EDIT: Wow it passed! I'm really happy, I've been trying to get something on the portal for quite a few years now. Yeah I know I'm sad lol. Anyways thanks to everyone who voted!
Well the purpose of this flash is to practice of course, this is my first, completed, non-stick flash. Vote fairly and enjoy! Please ignore the black borders around the movie in some scenes. It's a short, of course.
Going places for sure
It was on the verge of good. It had a point, and it was a good one at that. And i must admit i liked the humor of it, i thought it was funny. But perhaps a little better of drawing would be cool. If you spend more time on your projects im sure they will do very good.
alright
i didn't really see anything wrong with it, i thought it was funny how he exploded after he got hit.
keep it up, hopefully more of your stuff passes, as long as you put the effort in.
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Farting cars ftw?
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Does this pass the portal, sure proably. Infact it did. What should matter is did it pass what you want to express? In all fairness you could have redrawn the last scene with a lemonade bucket, and world to look better, and animated a better turn. Just more time next time.
The explosion effect was good, preety good in the begginning looks rushed towards end.
well...
i think this still qualifies as stick animation. one thing I liked was the way you blurred the background to show the focal point more clearly, and also the sound effects were pretty good. but in all fairness, that lemonade slinging meth head shouldn't have been standing in the middle of the road.
He really wanted to make a sale.