meh

the voice was out of sync with the vocals, and when you click on any button like extras it will play the vocal clip again.. it makes a cool echo effect if you do it fast enough though:)

Sloppy

You need to add more stopallsounds. You need to work on your dialog. The joke just wasn't funny sorry.

I really liked the art, its this flash's redeeming quality.

You need to put a lot more work into this is this is the quality you expect to submit the actual toon.

Also, we are called newgrounds not newsgrounds.

Seems like a fine enough idea

But you have to sync the lip movements to the voice much better then what this showed, otherwise it just looks like a shitty dubbed anime.

Get a better mic...

The audio quality was horrible. Your enunciation left a lot to be desired. The lip movements didn't sync up with anything and hero man just stood there like a robot.

Try some more movements, get a better microphone, speak succinctly without a mouthful of sandwich, and sync up the lips better.

Good Animation

Just learn how to match the mouth to the words better.