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Chao Adventures

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[UPDATE]: SWEET I MADE IT WOOOT! Thanks for keeping this in there ^^ oh and Press Space to get through Teh text k?


Don't be cruel please, I redone it so its better than it was... I hope you like the "features" or somethin I put in there ^^. Yeah it was Dill11 I was thinking about. Yeah I realize the replay doesn't work =(.

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for your first submission...

that was pretty good! just try to make movements smoother next time

hmm

one of the choas was missing the little ball on the heads XD

Pikachuprower responds:

lol I know I might work on it later if any one cares as I've said before >.<

Alright

Its alright, kinda short but Its ok I guess. "Looks yummy...."

Pikachuprower responds:

lol its just the first episode.... Maybe the next one if this gets seen enough i'll work on it k?

Not too bad

You have a good grip on sprite flash animations. But they are a little blocky with their movements, slow sometimes too shaky.

It was a good little storyline, In the future I think for the benefit of anyone reading the boxes you should have a text box that prompts the use of a spacebar.

It was a really good animation on the other hand. So dont feel like this is a bad review you got a 3/5 and 7/10 thats good.

Keep it up try some new anims and good luck with any other flash movies you make :D

Pikachuprower responds:

thanks at least your were being kind rather than other people I can mention >.>

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Jun 30, 2008
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