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Madness Exretation

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Well tell me if u want more its my first madness attempt and i think its really good for a first try

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Not bad for a 1st Shot. However...

This is your first animation and for that, I give you a 5\8! I want this to be in NG. I hope this passes judgement. Anyways a list of things for you to improve on.

1. Your Art. Madness is hard to screw up, your art was recognizable, however it was VERY LOW quality.
2. Animation. You need to learn a little more about animation, because at the moment they were choppy and crappy...

Anyways these are the two major things for you to work on, I hope you do, because you show lots of potential.



mmmmmmmmm

was ok



Keep at it

If first attempt, then it is semi-decent. Keep working on it and eventually you'll make great flash movies.
FYI, Exretation is not a word



Hmmm...

I would give you a higher score, but it look like you didn't put a whole lot of work into it.



Could be a LOT better

Reasons: Too short
Preloader rain graphics are horrible
legs keep moving after death
Not very good

Solution: Watch tutorials and make rain more realistic
Lengthen
Try frame-by-frame to remove leg problem
Improve blood graphics too.
Change movement.

Hopefully this will help you improve.


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Jun 29, 2008
11:34 AM EDT
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