Hmm...
It's all right for first, but that voices... Argh.
Keep the hard work (and I hope that you make better one's than this too).
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This is the very first flash i made a while ago, so don't expect to much.
I made this when i first got flash, and didnt know that much about it. I was going to put it on newgrounds earlier but i never got around to it. Well this is my first flash and i hope to make many more... better one's then this.
Rofl.
Did anyone notice that the mouths were from the lip syncing tutorial?
Art could use some work.
3'd and 1'd
pre-loader please
pre-loader next time
Not bad
It was ok four your first flash.. kinda funny, decent animation... only problem i had with it was that the voices were kinda hard to understand.
LOL
I liked the part where the guy ets squashed by the fat guy! Hilarious~ You should make the voices clearer.. Couldnt really understand what they were saying.. But other than that Good Work!
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