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Why am i drawing crappy you might ask.
Becuase my hand got shit with a b-b gun and it hurts to much for me to draw so thats why.
Also since i have used up my 2 portal submissons im using this.
i loved it but if you could improve on the timing that would be great
Could be improved
This was ok but could be improved, such as some "SUBTITLES" you did present some good characters, and a funny plot just needs abit more on that aspect of things
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles
Funny but needs more
Could have had a little more and mouth didnt fit words at all
Just two things.
I'm only writing a review cause i know it's going to pass judgment, but the only things I have to say is it may need to be a few minutes longer....oh and better sound thingies. Overall i gave you a 8/10 (the other two points aren't on cause you gotta fix the two problems i listed), The animation was awsome though! ^-^
Timing was off...
Other than that, great flash.
Four dwarven leaders in search for ancient treasure.
A Mystery Noir Series... Episode 6: Detective Swift confronts The Big Bad Wolf
Goofy dies. Sora cries.
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