hmmmm good
i liked the animation that you did but wen mario and cloud fight it got sorta bumpy... and i really dont understand the plot of this flash still good effort
Author Comments
SPRITE MOVIE...YOU'VE BEEN WARNED...
For those of you who are reading this and don't know who I am, I'm Haden Scott. Hi.
For a while now it seems like, I've been talking non-stop about a flash called "Death of Friendship". It's about two best friends torn about by one of their lust for power. Cloud, the good guy, is trying to save Mario, the bad guy, from destroying everything in his site and Cloud is our last hope. Mario, filled with rage, doesn't even care that it's Cloud right in front of him, and then he begins to attack him! Who will win....?
Cloud or Mario? Watch to find out!
If you've watched my other flash, you can tell that I've done a lot better:
Text that goes by at a nice pace, rather than click-to-next text
SFX, rather than NO SFX
Peace, and enjoy!
-Haden Scott (HellBentGoose)
Actually...
Sorry, but it is 'douche', not dousche. Just thought I'd settle that one.
The flash looked a bit hurried. You could actually see where you just couldn't be bothered to take the time to do it right. Take a bit more time and you will get better results. This is constuctive criticism by the way, although I am sure you will take it the wrong way. Feel free to write some abusive, poorly constructed and baseless response like you usually do.
Whatever.
HellBentGoose responds:
Huh, my friend told me that it's spelled like that...
and it was hurried. Made less than four hours. But I've improved, hence RcR: Transverse and SFC I; you're not gaining anything by reviewing my old flashes and telling me they're lame.
Show me one of your flashes so you have room to talk; you could be lying...
Hmmm.
Decent animation and sound. Cliche story. Short, choppy fight scenes.
Rough around the edges, but overall a solid piece of work. 3/5.
I'm already seeing improvement!
I liked this one a lot better! The sprite movement was smoother & easier to follow, and I have a better idea of what's going on. Keep practicing, and I look forward to the next installment!
HellBentGoose responds:
thanks man!
I'm working on my #4 project right now (really #3), it should be done within an hour or so
"Better than Sprite Hunter I"
This is way better than Sprite Hunter and for that you get and 8! But really you need to take more time in your projects t! You need to go to free sound effects.com and get some sword sound effects and fighting sound effects. I think with a little more time into this flash before you go on to your next flash would be best. This flash has a whole lot of hidden potential keep working at it!
HellBentGoose responds:
i know, right? i do take my time otherwise it wouldn't be as great as it is. I'll try that place, although I've found a UK site that has great sounds for Mario and stuff. I'm not re-working this, although...I could make a part II, with them again but longer and better SFX.
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