Good Improvement
Sorry, I didn't see this earlier,
Great improvement, you added music, fixed all of the mistakes and added comedy.
Great for a second try,
Author Comments
This is a fine tuned version of my last entry. Althought there is still more tuning to be done I think I've got the essins of the thing now. Hope you like it --
luke2to1
luke2to1 responds:
Thanks alot Mr. MeatLoafFan!
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Maybe you could add voices?
It moved a bit too slow too...
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ill give a ten because the music is funny and you see a hole in the face when hes looking towards you lol
HELL...YES...
Gun for nose kicks ass.
luke2to1 responds:
Isn't it!
HILARIOUS
Oh man i kept waiting till he killed that guy. Good job Good job