well

needs sound animation was flawless but what next in other words you have impressed me especially since its you first submission but hey wait i have an idea wanna team up ive got the script you do the animation if not oh well lolz

uhh huh...

well the animation was good. but why do i want to watch this>? it needs a reason to exist.

Animation was okay

But seriously, why bother submitting that? You said that it's a piece of shit; you could have at least added sound, some gag at the end, anything. It looks like the beginning to a longer project; you should have waited and submitted that.

sorry but NO

dude i thoght it was cool but sorry i sucked please make more work on the next flash u make

Unfinished

Your animation is fine. The figure exits smoothly. The silence is heavy, even white noise (air rushing past the plane) would be better.

However, you may be taken to task for meaninglessness. I know this represents animation effort, but a viewer demands effort on the story as well. In this case, the figure could have landed in a wood chipper or on a wedding cake.