Great graphics

Awesome drawings, but this was basically just a test movie. The music was okay, but you could have picked something better (Western music, maybe?). Overall, not a bad movie, but it's more of a tester movie than anything.

5/10
~ Z

Potential

You have talent however tutorials demonstrating what you are capable of doing in flash aren't commonly accepted in the portal which is likely why this flash received such an amount of criticism. If you really applied yourself to your next project you could certainly impress the critics at Newgrounds and perhaps achieve something you could proud of, however an endless loop containing nothing more than a few frames of redundant material will likely be perceived as repetitive and thus unfavorable. I gave your flash a positive score, but I'm not a consecutive forgiving or generous person. If your similarities to other work and lack of effort continue to be apparent in your submissions I'll likely blam your flashes.

its a start

not that good and not that bad
just keep praticeing your flash skills and im sure youll have a awesome flash in no time :)

What is that...

This looks oddly similar to the actual tutorial. Are you sure you didn't decompile it accidentally and post it here?

Make your own stuff, and next time, try to make something more exciting.

boring

i got bored of it im getting really anoyed at them sort of clips