Lol.
I found it funny because of it's farfetched "tall tail" nature. Pretty nice, I mean, a little rock puncturing a hole in a gigantic steel yot? That's f*ckin' farfetched if you ask me.
Bravo.
Author Comments
In response to the floating rock, accept any of these explanations:
1: Some rocks do float, the ones with holes in them.
2: Considering the rest of the movie, a floating rock shouldn't seem too farfetched.
3: It is not a rock, but instead a delicious fish.
4: The rock is hollow.
5: I wasn't thinking straight when I was making this, my mind is dead from final exams.
I haven't had a lot of spare time lately, so this took longer than I had hoped. Anyway, enjoy.
Also, the first ESHAS is not on Newgrounds, so don't look for it.
A Spencerberry
Hey nice ending. This one is better than the other two.
RandomCheese responds:
I recently discovered that the first is no longer anywhere on the internet, so I guess I should rename these to make then properly named.
Or remake the first one.
Pretty good.
Animation / Graphics - The animation was pretty good and in my opinion ran smoothly. I also thought the drawing was done well and it happens to be one of the styles that I like.
Story - I must say this was a pretty funny story. A floating rock doesn't need an explanation like in your author comments. I mean it's a flash animation, does a rock need to have a reason for floating? I found the rock floating funny and the end pretty funny when the guy was buying "fish".
Audio - I know you say the audio was out of sync, but I have to admit that I really didn't notice too much when watching. I probably would have if I had read your comment first, but I didn't.
Overall, pretty good. Yes it could of been a little longer, but shorts like this are also funny.
- GS -
C52
Newgrounds Mafia.
haha
I enjoyed this short flash. Some issues with the flash were that the sounds continued while a different action played, like after the rock rolled off the hill. Other than that I liked the style and it had a funny ending. Maybe spend more attention to the people if you are to include them in the story.
Cute little story
I liked all the random events. Very cute.