too short
you need to make a new 1 and make it longer
Author Comments
Nothing much to say ,just that this is a second part of my naruto themed sprite flashes.
Anyway this is the first part (not connected to this)http://www.newground s.com/portal/view/444111
This gets better and better more times you see it (because of the music),so just *click* that play button as soon as the animation ends. To have a close look at the fight just zoome to characters.
DestinyChild responds:
Well yeah i agree and i am kinda workin on it.But i have litte time so it is a slow procces.
Um..
The obvious thing to say would be "It's too short", it is obviously too short. Saying it's too short would help you in no way, so I'll state something different.
I couldn't see it far away, but when I read that it may be a good idea to zoom in, I noticed you had the colored Backgrounds of your sprites still intact in the corners. You need to delete every one of these, it is the most unprofessional thing you can do with a sprite animation.
The bottom line is that this flash is bad. The main problem is that the sprites are so shaky and badly animated. You need to zoom in 2000% and use the arrows to line them up perfectly every single time. You may or may not know this already.
But a good thing you have going or you with this animation, is the genius use of sprites. I noticed at the end Naruto had thrown a kunai upward as if uppercutting and a kunai stuck into the assailant's stomach. Most people just see Naruto's kunai throwing sprite and a kunai next to it and just add the 2 together. The same with punching, kicking and other attacks. You seem to understand not to be bounded by the spritesheet and do very original things with your animations.
But with that said it's not fair to give you anything more but a 4 as it would be unfair to the rest of the sprite animators who painstakingly zoom in every single frame until it's just right.
So in conclusion;
Horrible Animation
Background visible
Genius use of sprites
DestinyChild responds:
Thanks for such a full review!I like your advices and i agree that i have mistakes.Now i am learning how to draw.I still suck but i hope for methiis i am full of ideas and my imagination is great(so i heard) but i cant draw so i am trying to learn.School is in pogress so i have free time.Thanks again and bye!
short
good but TOO SHORT. the best thing about this was it only took a few seconds to load :D
Crap........
i agree with DocDemigod this is a short cheaply made animation its crap nothin else to say...
Crap.
Too short, cheaply made... What else is there to say?