no shit there short
relitively, they had no point what-so-ever and short is an understatement, you shoulda put something more like its so short...its unbelieveable so i woudnt of have to of wasted my time
Author Comments
Two short animations I made. This is my first submission to Newgrounds.
A warning- "Fire Flower" contains sprites, just in case you really hate them or something. However, the other one does not. "Fire Flower" is also not meant to parody 8-bit theater.
Vinegartaffy responds:
That's a very strange idea of constructive criticism... seriously...
Ummm....
Well, I will give you some kudos for making an intro start screen and making the buttons clicky. Sound effects were ok. They matched the animations, but, as for story line there didn't seem to be much thought. This appears to be more like a "look what I can do" type flash. Get a good story board and creativity and you may have something going. You do have the animations down alright :P
Amusing
They were cool, but you should probably do more short clips and send them in together rather than a few, but I thought they were funny :)
Vinegartaffy responds:
Thanks!
I was considering submitting something with more connected shorts at a later period.
Sprites Were Good
The sprites were actually well done, which is saying a lot, because most of the sprites submissions here suck. They were both pretty random and short, but the music was nice, and the animation was pretty good. It's passable, I voted 3, so not too bad son.
The shorts could use improvement..
But I see effort.
