well,

it could use some work, but its good for a start. try useing something other than toad's "ahooo!" or toads "ahhhhh" so much. also a good idea would be to capitallize the word God right before mario climbs the vine

This was okay....

I can tell you I dont like sprites, but I didn't rate it a 4 cuz of that, It had an okay concept, Funny in some parts... Not made completely well, some glitches, but in all was good for a first sprite movie, If you make more I'll watch'em...

Well...

It had its parts, like God. Except whats with the sudden change at the end? It starts out jsut some random **** and all of a sudden theres a plot! Don't you realize people on Newgrounds don't need a plot! Throw in a gay joke and you'll get at least a six. Maybe next time spend a little more time on. But what do I know I've been makin' crap on Windows Movie Maker.

Ehehehe

First I thought this was a bad flash, but when he was about to climb up to god and when he looked up.....he looked very funny (The head)!!! :DD:D Thats why I gave you 8. You should have recieved a 5 instead, but I changed my mind

wtf?

its only funny how bad this is xD. 1) why is mario toad? 2) over used jokes 3) bad art =/