Nice Storyline
Make the animations smoother and use MORE frames to express the sticks' movements, and stick with the storyline, it'll probably grow into a successful series... >.>
Author Comments
this is just a practice b4 i make my big series but this is a preveiw of another series i might work on any ways the best animation is at the end when i say "wrong just kidding" becus i did sum lousy animation and then did a lil serious form of it after that.
Wtf?
This is just a flash full of 'nothingness'
Bad Graphic
Bad Graphic.. ._. BAAAADDDD GRAPHIC.. bad's artwork
this is junk bad graphics
a cow could make better graphicspls try again
Alright, Pretty Nice for a Practice
This is pretty interesting, lol. The animation for the most part was pretty good, although it was a little rough at times. The audio was a little too inconsistent in volume, but was good. The graphics were nice for a concept like this, which is nice to advertise while making a practice run, right? In total, your series could be well-known if you keep practicing (and making stuff like this,lol.) It was worth my time, and keep up the good work!