need a lot of work
the character needs some worj like arms legs hands such as those, work on it please ... need a background, speed up the frame rate, make it longer this was too short to even to be considered a short film a short is like 1 minute or soo if not a bit longer .... the art work was not bad... the blood was good i always like blood... try to add more then just one thing happening to this guy, he fires a gun and a car crashes barley blows up then he dies not too interesting.... work on your videos more before you submit them i can tell you have the potential not the patience... and i'm surprised this wasn't blammed yet ..... good luck on future projects and take your time NG isn't going anywhere....peace