Animation / Graphics - For the most part the drawings and animation was nicely done and ran smoothly. There were a couple of things that could of been drawn better.
Story - Again, decent story. Actually pretty original in my opinion. I like that it wasn't just a one part game. The second part of the game helped a little. I wouldn't mind the game being just a bit longer though. The last boss was also pretty easy to beat. He barely even touched me since he just repeated his routine of attack and defend.
Audio - This was probably the best part of your flash. You had nice sounds that went well with the animation and also some nice music in there.
Overall, not too bad and congrats on having your movie pass submission on newgrounds.
- GS -