that was pretty cool.
but i would suggest drawing with the brush instead of the pencil, and addind a preloader.
4/5 8/10
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Originally called "The Package", but the name was taken.
Yes, I know, I should use a pre-loader. I'm sorry this does not have one. I did this for my animation class, which I'm now done with, and I don't have flash at home to add one of the Newgrounds ones. I hope you will still enjoy the show.
I have finally completed my final film for Introduction to Animation class! Best thing high school classes and getting up before 9 ever did for me. XD I still fail at drawing humans though (poor Zelpha). Oh, well. Still love this film. *hugs film*
Deviantart member and Delta's voice actor Shiro-VII will be the first to tell you that this got a lot of cutting. He's gonna record a lot of lines I had him record that are not in this. XD I kinda like it more this way though. Down to the basics.
Why can't I ever make anything that isn't cute? The darklings are SUPPOSED to be DEMONS. Instead, I get a mutation between a goomba and Sonic the hedgehog. Almost felt bad setting them on fire. D:
Psst, watch all the credits for a little extra tidbit.
Cute :)
I liked it, the storyline was cute. The voice acting was not too bad. So all you really need to do is streamline your animation. I will be looking forward to more of your work.
Netbug009 responds:
Thank you, though it may be a long time till I do this stuff again. I don't have flash at home, unfortunatly. I dd this all in my class, which is now over. I hope to get my own copy someday though.
mhh..
I liked it... if there were more details on graphics, it'll be just fine... and more movement... no one runs with the arms straight.. :D
it's cool, but where does it beggins? the story..
Uhm.. voices were pretty good on acting... but you know... if you can't get them to be "understandable" try adding subtitles...
Cameras were awesome!!
=D
Netbug009 responds:
Thank you. Yeah, the arms thing. -_-; I really agree. I could have done better there. Maybe made the arms swing more.
There was more story to it, but time restraits killed a ton of it. I turned this in th last day possible to get a grade, and I don't have flash at home, so it was get i done then or don't do it at all.
Thank yo for your honest critique. I appreciate it. :) God bless.
Sorry but
Bad art, sound, and plot. Simply put, it was poorly made and organized.
Netbug009 responds:
Thank you for your honestly, however, I would appreciate advice on how to improve if you feel it's that terreble. Thank you. God bless. :)
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