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Super Mario Wars v2

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This was my first real animation which i posted the other day i have improved it a bit.


Ok regards to the voices, i used text to speech with fruity loop studio since i didn't want to use my own voice, and i dont actually have a head set, but i guess i could have used my phone.

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Just no.

I respect your beginning animations (honestly I couldn't do much better, but then again I don't aspire to be a flash animator), but you should really look at your work before you submit it. I know you want to put entries out here in the portal, but you don't want to have something like this be what people remember you by.

Try again.

Ok first of all this was a wast. Real voice actors would have been good if you used a speech filter. Second, the animations were box shapes except for the actual character who looked like a squiggled line with color. Go back to drawings, re-do them, make it look better and Try Again.

drawing

u cant draw really

could use alot of work

OK animation, I like the style, but the audio was a major problem, The voices deffinetly must be changed and the other sounds just didn't fit

hmm

it was average maybe work on ur animation a bit and spend more time on it.

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Uploaded
Jun 11, 2008
4:03 PM EDT