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Jun 9, 2008 | 11:13 PM EDT

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Well this is a simple flash that i made, i know it's not like the one of the pros in here but well i subbmited.
This video is based in one of the two major stories i have wrote, and i hope you find it interesenting or at least not crap -.-
well c'ya...



Rated 3 / 5 stars


Buenos efectos de sonido, lo demas... tiene razon el tipo de abajo, porque se movio asi de la pantalla de la computadora como si quisiera que nosotros lo leyeramos? el chiste es aparentar que el publico en realidad no esta ahi... esos son los buenos angulos...


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


I would write this in spanish but people would throw virtual things at me (wow, big deal)...

Pablo, first, learn some spelling and grammar from the 150 colones education we are receiving, second learn how to use flash, and third, I don't get why the hell the guy on the video moves all of his body to the side as if he was suffering some kind of contortional attck.

Kill the rafas.

P.S. 1 Star only because I know you


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Sounded promising

I like the idea of a flash movie (or series) based on an established storyline but there wasn't enough content here to sink my teeth into. In spite of that the story still seems potentially interesting but needs better character design than just stick figures. Plus if vocals aren't an option then it helps to make the text dialogue easier/more interesting to read. (Accompanying visuals, varying fonts etc.)


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Needs work

Basicly, It was just another really short flash that are very common on NG. There really was not much of a plot or anything, just a skit about "somthing is going to happen." If whatever DID happen in the movie it would probably be decent. I understand that it is just the beginning of it, but you could have waited to submit it and made more to it. You could also work more on the graphics too they were just a bunch of sticks and everything else was pretty poorly drawn in flash so you should really work on that. Im no artist, and could do no better, but I don't make flashes. Another big thing was the huge lack of animation. If you are going to be an animator, your going to need to learn how to animate better. You can find a ton of tuts right here on NG. Now about the sound... well for most of the flash, there was none and then at the end there was that annoying cracking sound. Most good flashes need voices or at least a little music. Oh yeah and check your spelling too, thats pretty important. Im pretty much done here, but the last thing you need to keep in mind is if your going to have a scene selection, its going to have to be longer than 2 little scenes. Overall, it was pretty bad but keep practicing and (hopefully) you'll get better. Now Im done!



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

nothing too interesting or new

This really didn;t catch my attention, there was hardley anything to grab on to. try this again, but this time with some more substance