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Battles; DBZ part 1

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Hey Everyone,


This my first flash the using sprites i hope eveyone enjoys it, its very short but i hope you still enjoy it this is part 1 and part2 will be comig very soon =D i am doing street fighter aswell so keep watching =D


Hope you enjoy it


ChrisDH

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Well

It was bad but not the worst

::|

a bit good.

ChrisDH responds:

thank you =D

ChrisDH

pretty nice for your first one

I'm giving you a 5 cause u put in good effort, and I really see some potential here. There's nothing really more that I can say that would help you other than stick to it. Don't rush things and take your time, most of the stuff I've seen on here really took a few hours, and it turns out pretty much crappy.

Great work so far and best of luck to ya

ChrisDH responds:

thank you very much i know i need to work on effot n stuff but i will get there lol, i kno want i need to do like i need to work more on stuff take my time jst take my time like you sed, i pratice everyday so hopfully i will het there =D

thank you very much for the advice and good luck to you

ChrisDH

ok it wasn't bad

i would work on things you have potential definatly i can't say too many bad things about since i've never made a video however i can tell you what i think would have made it better..lighting and sound effects for the powering up....maybe a little dialouge other than that it wasn't half bad i mean it was a little choppy and a little short

ChrisDH responds:

thanks for the four =D

i will learn more about effect n stuff and hopfully i will get better thank you

ChrisDH

fist flash hu!?

well ,the animation is ok(little jerky),but the effects were the point you gave me to put a 0 to it.
they were as bad as an ass.
try some blur and lightings.

ChrisDH responds:

thanks for the advice =D i do need to work on my effect n stuff but i am getting ther i just need to keep on praticeing =D

thank you very much

ChrisDH

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Jun 3, 2008
5:29 PM EDT