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Watch out for those arcade games! Leave a review if you wish, I respond to all.
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Little-Rena responds:
Why don't you PM me?
Insufficient
There was not enough here to make an adequate submission. It was lacking in content, artistic talent, animation, effort, and excecution.
The sound design was perhaps the best aspect of this piece, yet it too felt short of anything that can be considered good or funny.
It's a shame because there was the opportunity to make something decent out of this idea. The concept of a "game fighting back" is almost always amusing and the choice in subject matter, an old arcade, is ripe for just a situation.
In the end, however, the author failed to put enough effort into this piece and the result was a childish mess. The best case scenario is that the author will grow and mature enough to regret ever having made this piece -- a sad thing to say, when embarrassment is the best you can hope to get out of something you've made.
Little-Rena responds:
Are you trying to offend me with this review? I mean, this is an online website, how am I suppost to feel embarrassed by a flash I have submitted to a bunch of people who don't know who I am, lmao.
Although, I find it funny that you talk about artistic talant and you can't even make a decent looking profile picture, let alone a flash animation. Your profile picrute is blured and text on it is hardly funny, maybe you will mature and fix that problem.
Or maybe not right?
huh?
didnt find it to funny.....gave me a small chukle tho....and next time get better sfx and make ur ppl not stick figures
Little-Rena responds:
Oh well.
LAME
SOOO CHEEZY! Get some better special effects
Little-Rena responds:
Okay, I will fire myself and hire a new effects manager.
Meh
Well... it doesn't look like the story was too well thought out; It wasn't solid and it didn't quite pull off random humor that well. I think the key factor that throws the second off is the animation. Not going to sugar coat it, it blows. My tip is just keep practicing; Good animation can make something like that a hell of a lot more funny. Especially considering the explosion graphic you had in it is ancient and overused.
ps - the witty replies to the other comments make the caboose laugh
Little-Rena responds:
I think you have pretty much covered what was already said only in a much longer manner, as well as pointing out the explosion animation which yes is overused. The reason the story isn't so good is because this was a part for a collab that was never finished.
ps - I got too lazy to make my responce longer.