I just got flash and i decided to make a short film about the dangerous effects of smoking, just watch it and be intrigued by the information in this film and how it thoroughly explains the dangerous effects of smoking. Any suggestions and productive criticism would be helpful.
burgers
Yah cigerts suck but weed is awsome yahhhh much better then cigirets or outher drugs which just kill you. plus you dont have 2 smoke weed you can eat it any why this movie was just anouther public service messige about conforming so yahh not cool
Uninspired
I am not exactly sure how this passed judgment, but let me say that this was completely uninspired. I doubt you took longer than fifteen minutes to make this.
Here are some helpful tips:
1) Don't make sideshows. You can just as easily do that with PowerPoint. I like to think that we, on Newgrounds, are better than that.
2) Write better.
3) Use the line tools so that your artwork is composed of vectors. Not only is the paint tool harder to work with, it increases the amount of vectors more than a tenfold, thus increasing the size of your flash. Not that the file was too large, but if your were to work on a real project, you'd need to start using the line tool.
4) Use audio from the audio portal. 'Nuff said.
HEY FUCK YOU EH?
Very funny
Very entertaining, all humorous flash artists should learn from this.
Rolfmao
Luv ur humor!
smoke is baaaaaad
There is no humor in this, it is a serious message to our youth in need of guidance.
Well, smoking "iz" bad... I suppose
but so is your flash... I mean it's just an opinion typed and poorly drawn... with a song most people like tattoo'd into it.
But yeah, you guys really don't know what you're talking about... I smoked for like a month... it cloggs up your lungs and shit. Now the "bloodshot eyes" is marijuana, trust me.
HEY FUCK YOU EH?