It's weird to judge something so short in terms of story. I think the credits and intro are longer than the actual movie here! It's still great. I have obviously not followed the entire story. I love how it sets up a sequel.
I don't think it will ever be made and I don't care. I love how they acknowledge there will always be conflict. I'm glad to have seen uh, some of this. In modern times, this could be submitted in far fewer parts. Well, maybe even one or two submissions.