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Exile is a fantasy adventure based on a continent called Ethos. It follows the story of Luke Helm, a boy who's parents were murdered by an unknown killer. Because of it he could join the Royal Guards, protectors of the city, and he strives to get his revenge.
Cool
They are TOTALLY fighting in an office building
totally sweet
Ok...
It seems like you went back and touched up the animation while leaving the voice acting the way it was. That was disappointing. There are some lines given that desperately need revision. It does look better than the original, and the fight scene does help a bit, but if the series continues to sound like the first episode, it's going to be a challenge to sit through. That said, I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story.
ummm
this kinda...
sucks ass
great
wat is the name of the song during the credits
RiverJordan responds:
Departure, by Cry of Silence
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Daily 2nd Place May 29, 2008