You've got potential, but you need better animation. I may be a noob, but there's one thing I know and that's I KNOW YOU CAN DO BETTER! You got a pretty good storyline, and the drawing is pretty good, but in honour of Newgrounds, I'm only giving you 5 of 10 stars. It was entertaining, but could use some improvement. In other words, YOU RULE, but need to spend a little more time on your flash movies :)
Thank you, but you'll see some improvement tomarrow when I'll upload next ep. And by the way I made this few month ago so wait for other eps.
zomg you draw horrible
nice concept (10/10 for idea) BUT WHAT A HORRIBLE ANIMATION (0/10)