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Spatchcock Gourmet Pizza

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The full title should read 'Grant Spatchcock's Gourmet Pizza'.. curse NG's title limit!

I've had this flash on the backburner since Janurary. I'm glad its finally done. It tells the story of Grant Spatchcock, a typical Aussie bloke who loves making gourmet pizzas.. perhaps too much.

Audio is courtesy Tony Martin, from the late, great radio program 'Get This', which was unceremoniously axed last year. Consider this a eulogy. Enjoy!

Reviews


it got boring after a while...

hearing him say gourmet shit all the time was funny at first btu then it just got boring. you need to expand it into an interesting story or cut it short.



Good, but you can do better

Not a bad job, but the text is too much faster and I wasn't able to read everything. During some scene the background is too much dark to read something..

you need a slower text and a white background behind.



original

it was original but there wasnt much in there that was funny. the narrator was cool though.



Eh... Complete miss for me.

I'm all for random comedy, but the tone of this whole flash was the same and I didn't get any spikes of laughter... I mean, you pulled off the boring worker well... But realism wasn't entertaining.

Just couldn't get into this one at all, 2/5 and 3/10. Try varying the mood in your flashes and the delivery would be a LOT better.



OMG!

why did you rate this for evry1? it has cursing in it. ALOT. maybe thats becuse you have no vocabalary? ya thats it you have no vocabalary or at least not alot!


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14,617
Faves:
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Votes
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Score
3.91 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 26, 2008
9:26 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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  • Daily 4th Place May 27, 2008