This is my favorite of your Lock Legion submissions. I hope to see more like this.
This was funny, but it could have been better in my opinion.
Bonus points for fable :B
THe animating was decent and the story was not bad.
Well that was a bit much, no?
Didn't this submission seem a bit odd, and a bit much for such a trivial idea in the first place? The graphics were solid, as they always are, but once again the submission lacked in the story department. It lacked any flavour or feeling to it, and I did not enjoy it in the least bit. I mean, is it such a big deal to smash a computer with a hammer? Not really, not to go around walking and shit, like he did. Kinda' odd really. Meh.
A bad workman always blames his tools - you should have directed him to the Where is / How to forum on the NGBBS :P
That shameless plug from me aside, you've come up with the old cliched plotline of the wild goose chase, which works well in this incarnation. I liked that Carrot kept hold of his hammer for shits and giggles, as it's a neat twist.
The animation and the artistic style used was neatly drawn and the only issue with the animation in itself is that Wine never tended to move fast enough for my liking. Sorting that out might have given a better overall impression of the flash.
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